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Thursday 16 February 2017

Why do people need to drink water

Why people need to drink water
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
T
Title - What you will be explaining
I
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
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Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title
Why People Need to Drink Water
Introduction
My topic is about why do we need to drink water, Because it keeps us hydrated and active. Because when we do not have enough water in our body we start been lazy so that means that our body hasn’t had enough water.  

Information
1st element
It keeps us hydrated and strong. This is why when athletes or players have a big tournament coming up their coach tells them to drink lots of water, it keeps us hydrated and the strength to do lots of things like training but it also helps us with our homework because our brain needs water.     

Information
2nd element
So we can have showers. Most countries limit their water so their kids have to take a bath with the same water or they all have to have a shower at the same time. This is why we are so lucky in New Zealand because we can have showers in the morning and in the afternoon so let’s use our water smart and take showers everyday   

Information
3rd element
It can prevent you from cancer. As the video said many people get cure and prevent mixed up, No water can not cure you but it can prevent you from cancer so you have a better chance of not having cancer.

Conclusion
We all need water,  because we can’t survive without water. Scientist say that you can survive without food but not water that’s saying that we need water the most. Fizzy drinks should be forbidden under the age of 12 year olds. Keep hydrated.



Wednesday 1 February 2017

Story of myself

Talofa lava my name is Siaosi, I am in room 3 with my beautiful teacher Mrs Tele’a. 2017 wow! Hasn’t the year gone fast, it was really sad to see the year 8’s leave but 2017 is our year and no one will stop us. 2016 in sports we have lost many sports, what was worst was most of them we would lose in the finals that didn’t isn’t going to stop us not even for 2017. 2017 is our year so that means every sports we are going to commit to training so we know what to do on the field, it means in learning we are going to pay attention to the teacher and learn as much as possible.

2016 started school in the first day of term 1 one of my main sports that I enjoyed was rugby union, 7’s, Tag, touch and Ki o rahi.  We won Ki o rahi, we lost 7’s at Auckland champs in the finals, we lost rugby union, we lost tag at Auckland champs in our semi and we lost touch in the finals. That’s just my main sports and how gutted we were last year.

2017 is our year we may not be able to win every sports but let’s give it all we got! . This year I am a year 8 student and I want to lead my school\team and strive to succeed. Remember the same effort you give in sports you do the same with our learning.